16/05/12

IALT Use well chosen verbs and replace the boring verbs and uses interesting verbs.

A lion stalking its prey.

His claws gripped onto the ground. With his eyes following its every move. He slowly crawled closer to his prey. Drooling by just seeing its hypnotizing stripes.

What other verbs could I have use ?

~ Zandrea

K.O lost

Room 14 lost to room 17 in the semi finals for K.O.   Room 17 won the first round and we won the second round, we had the get our C team ready to play.Room 17 won by a minute I think. What do you think we could have done better?